Feedback after doing my monologue:
- Take care with accent as it wasn't always consistent. I know that I lost my accent on the line "like the whole world was dividing into two parts. Me, and everybody else". To ensure that I don't slip out of the accent, I shall keep repeating this line, and if I am still struggling, I shall find a clip of someone else doing this monologue to see how the line should sound.
- Maybe lean forward on the line "who told him". This would make the piece seem even more conversational and would avoid me sitting in one position for so long.
- I was told that I was engaging from the very start and managed to keep the audience engaged the whole time.
- James said that he really liked how I mimed playing with the knife at the end.
- Apparently this was very comical - especially the line "piece of shit".
- They said that I had a good use of tone and pace
- I maintained my accent throughout.
- Good use of pauses
- Maybe vary tone a little bit more? Perhaps get a bit aggressive then bring it back down again.
- Maybe vary volume throughout?
- Convincing
- Comical as I playedto the stereotypes
- Vary pace more
- Perhaps use pauses more
- Good tone of voice and body language
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