Devising (24) - Performance Evaluation

What went well:

• The books and transitions worked well
• The movement worked well in the majority of Rob's scene
• Rob's narration was effective
• The dialogue in my scene was naturalistic
• The right emotion was portrayed in my scene
• The timing worked well for my scene
• The movement in Lewis' scene was effective
• The conversation in Lewis' scene had all the interruptions we needed
• The narration for the motifs worked well

What could have been better:

• Rob's narration could have been louder
• There was an issue with timing during Rob's scene with the movement
• The letter passing in my scene was a little bit messy
• We didn't have as much as time as desired so Rob couldn't learn the piano part for my scene, but this worked okay in the end, as he brought on the telegram - meaning we didn't have to worry about differentiate Ollie as Harry and the postman.
• Ollie's scene could have done with some lighting for when he falls backwards.
• The bags were the wrong way round for mine and Lewis' scene - Lew should have had the white bag for mine, and Rob should have had the black bag for Lewis'.

What we shall ensure for the performance: 

• All music is on a laptop so there are no interruptions or skipping on to the next track
• All props will be carefully pre-set
• We shall all speak louder